Nov 8, 2024
Are you blushing? I know, I know, but to tease seduction on its edge is a good ploy to pull the reader in. Anyhow, I know you didn't have sexual relations despite her desire to the contrary. Besides I did put "and seduction" into parenthesis.
Two more items. One: she was doing her damndest to seduce you. And Two: you can seduce without the hint of any sexuality with a tease as all marvelous writing does - forthwith. And you with an edge of subtlety.