Thank you. 🙏

It's different - this fantasy from the science fiction stuff. Chapters 1. 2, 3, 4, and possibly 5 are one long chapter in the original novel of 20 pages. I've paired it down some. Adding bits. Writing the new edition is fun. It's clear that my writing has improved since arriving on Medium. Though Chapter 1 on Medium is almost exactly the same as the original.

Trials of the desert await.

The light cometh! Hey ho. By seconds more light, then minutes... And the wheels go round and round...

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